User talk:Xu Davella/Characters/Oomoo
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Good work. Thief is one of the few professions that can actually have a job like that outside killing things. Family business didn't feel so awkward (as it usually does, when it comes to character background), either. Don't give up, if you're planning to keep writing. Mediggo 06:14, 29 July 2011 (UTC)
- I really appreciate your input. I'm still trying to sort out the stories but they're coming together slowly. :) --Xu Davella 07:18, 29 July 2011 (UTC)
- That family story also gives a credible reason for your character's profession, instead of... Well, let's just say that, if you've probed around wiki, you can find some quite silly explanations for player characters choosing their profession or learning their chosen trade, etc... Of course it matters a lot how the background story is like, not just which way one's parents had influence on their offspring. Yours is also good, imo, because it takes parts of official game lore, history and characters, and isn't just a random story which throws everything out of window. :P Like some do... Mediggo 07:36, 29 July 2011 (UTC)
- I added another part, but I'll have to rewrite the end because it feels a little rushed. Bleh I'll tidy it up soon. --Xu Davella 15:04, 29 July 2011 (UTC)
- That family story also gives a credible reason for your character's profession, instead of... Well, let's just say that, if you've probed around wiki, you can find some quite silly explanations for player characters choosing their profession or learning their chosen trade, etc... Of course it matters a lot how the background story is like, not just which way one's parents had influence on their offspring. Yours is also good, imo, because it takes parts of official game lore, history and characters, and isn't just a random story which throws everything out of window. :P Like some do... Mediggo 07:36, 29 July 2011 (UTC)
